Thursday, 13 March 2014

Mia's camp writing

Thoughts run through my mind about what the high ropes would be like. I imagine large poles the size of small mountains and long ropes like the ones trapeze artists use. I tremble in fear, my heart is pumping, the one activity I'm not excited about. I feel tense inside, since I have a major fear of heights, I don't know what will happen to me, will I fall or will I succeed?
By Mia

6 comments:

  1. Great work Mia keep it up. By Caleb

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  2. Great writing Mia. I like the way you have said I tremble with fear.B y Natasha

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  3. Great work Mia I love your writing.
    By Tayla

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  4. Wow mia you have painted a picture in my mind!
    Izzy rm 23

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