Thursday, 13 March 2014

Arwa's camp writing

I can see the long ropes in my head, I can just imagine myself swing from rope to rope. I can already feel the sweat coming down my body. By Arwa
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  1. Unknown13 March 2014 at 17:57

    Nice story Arwa. I like the way you have showed not telled .Next time think about adding more detail and describing words . By Natasha

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  2. Anonymous11 April 2014 at 08:54

    Well awesome story Arwa I like the way you showed not told.Next time you should use more describing words.By Liam.

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