Thursday, 13 March 2014

Dean flying fox writing

Imagine you zooming across the line and everything around you is just a blur. You can hear your friends around you screaming, "that was awesome. As you are zooming down you are thinking how you will stop, will you hit the pole? Or will you hit a bump? 

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  1. Didn't you scream when you went down the fly fox? Can you tell me how high it was? By Debashish.

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  2. Was it cool when you went down the flying fox

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  3. Awesome work Dean

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  4. Nice writing dean.By James

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  5. That's a really good piece of writing.

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