Thursday, 13 March 2014

Alex's wonderful camp writing.

I imagine the flying fox will be very high and it will speed down the zip line like an angry rhino chasing a mouse. The flying fox will be a little bit scary but it will also be lots of fun. By Alex.
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  1. Unknown15 March 2014 at 16:49

    I like the way you have said "Like an angry rhino chasing a mouse"Next time use a better word than fun and scary. By Natasha

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    1. Anonymous10 April 2014 at 19:31

      I agree with you Natasha.
      By Tayla

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  2. Anonymous9 June 2014 at 11:18

    I like the way you used lots of details.
    By Tayla

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