Monday, 26 May 2014

Home Learning Week 4

Read the comments on last week's Home Learning. 
Choose another person's introduction and write a reply, that continues the next part of the story! 
Let's see what interesting events happen next...



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  4. Mia's Photo.
    'Ahhhhhhhh'!
    It's massive white pointy teeth rose out of the water and dived down deeply as it's gray body came closer and closer to me. Then suddenly I felt a pain below me like I've never experienced before. My skin is as pale as paper and my eys start to droop. Slowly, I start to sink into the clear but undiscovered water. I then spot a humongous patch of red liquid under me. Feeling dizzy, I lift both of my legs up. But one is no longer their.
    By Teeshan.

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